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A month has passed, and yet again-
Now looking back at how I've been.
Embraced by fate, as we unfold-
The love we share, the life we hold.

We've had our ups, as well as downs-
And had some smiles, but mostly frowns.
Despite these things - got in the way-
Our love survived until today.

Can't help but wonder what to do-
What sort of gift, I may give you.
For in these years, I gave them all-
Material things, big and small.

Alone, I think, what kind of gift-
To signify as well uplift.
Today and feelings - show I care-
More of your love, I may ensnare.

It's understood, begin a date-
And guarantee I won't be late.
Treat you a queen, and do it well-
Make today, a story to tell.

With plans in hand, best of my wit-
The perfect gift, won't seem to fit.
Ideas flushed out of my mind-
In every search, nothing to find.

So here I am, almost empty-
Nothing to give - then it strikes me.
Something only I can provide-
Where happiness and love collide.

Just focus on a perfect day-
In all that happens, have your way.
Must keep it up, that's understood-
And treat you like the way I should.

The other gifts - I mention such-
The ones you see as well as touch.
I realize as well as yearn-
Each other - more of us, we learn.

This day we have may end so fast-
But more will come and all shall last.
I'm glad our days work out so fine-
And celebrate months at a time.
©2008-2009 ~NaLdiAn
:iconnaldian:

Author's Comments

This little poem is about celebrating monthly anniversaries or in short - "monthsaries"... Not many people indulge themselves on this kind of celebration especially long term and permanent relationships, but I do, together with the woman I love...
:D

Having celebrated so many monthsaries and given so many gifts, I lost new ideas on what to give, so this poem is basically about that... Haha!
:evillaugh:

Well, personally, today [06-11-2008], is actually our 47th monthsary! So I guess you'll have an idea why I can't seem to think of a gift to give to the woman I love, material, I mean... As for the non-material, I've pretty much got that covered, but that's personal, except for the perfect day I mentioned here...

To the love birds out there who celebrate monthsaries like me, this poem goes out to all of you, too! Good luck and more to all of us! Weeee!
:glomp:

Nhietotz, I dedicate this piece to you, my love...
Happy 47th Monthsary!

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oohhh.. lapi na din pla ung sakin... hehe.. what to give.. what to give... :D

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"to reality i bid farewell, as i take my eternal slumber...

:sleep:

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PLZZZ -- [link]
:iconnaldian:
That is always the big question when it comes to celebrations...

Best of luck! :D

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
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maganda kaso.. parang napaka-materialistic ng dating.. :constipated:

o baka di ko lang gets..

anyhoo, oks sya.. Pagaling ka na ulit ng pagaling. :thumbsup:

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:b0x0rz::b0x0rz::b0x0rz:

ATWP


If you want to taste the ground,
feel free to attack me.
~NaLdiAn


:b0x0rz::b0x0rz::b0x0rz:
:iconnaldian:
Actually, the poem describes just how the mere thought of giving gifts and dates alone would help one realize just how much you still care for one another and keep it up until forever... It's not the gifts or material stuff, but just thinking of what to give and what you've already given can help you look back, reminisce, and cherish more what you have and how far you've gone, and how much you're willing to give...

The perfect day - the thoughts, intentions, dreams, and sweet memories... That's what I intended for this poem, or so at least I tried to put it that way... Wahehehe...

Thanks so much, nhietotz! I'll keep doing my best to ensure that my poems keep getting better and better... It's all because of you, you know...
:D

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥

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