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Painting with Words by ~NaLdiAn:iconNaLdiAn:



Like a painter wh○ paints
with the colors of this world,
I'm a painter who paints
with my thoughts put into words.

Every line that I make
As I dig deep in my soul,
With each breath that I take
It's my heart that's on a roll.

I struggle what to say
Find the best illustration,
Keep my mind - not astray
Recall my inspiration.

It's mostly about love
And within, I reign supreme,
As lies, I do not shove
Making my life as the theme.

Of course, some may be sad
Still in all is where I shine,
As most may find me mad,
Expose the truth that is mine.

I rant a lot of things
May speak boldly as I dare,
As the comfort it brings
Does relieve me from despair.

So whatever the case
Caught in the moment, I feel,
Set the mood and my pace,
And in my heart, remain real.

I begin with my scratch
Utter the words in my mind,
Sort the feelings I catch
Let my memories unwind.

As I move with the flow
Gaze upon my creation,
Lights my heart with a glow
When arriving - completion.

Thus, I speak before you
Show what ticks within my shell,
As I help you see through
This passion, I do so well.

Like a painter who paints
Using colors of this world,
I'm a painter who paints
Using life put into words.
©2008-2009 ~NaLdiAn
:iconnaldian:

Author's Comments

This poem is actually based upon my signature:

Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.

It was written by the love of my life with a little retouch of my words to make it sound better the way I hoped she wanted to. Taking things from there, I thought, why don't I make a poem and continue from there, so I did and here it is.

This poem is, of course, about what I love to do, making poems! And just so everyone here knows, I started making poems way back in high school when I became close to this girl that I had a huge crush on and made poems. Reading her works and believing she's the type of person who could appreciate poetry, I decided to make them, too, and show them to her so that I can impress her. Before I knew it, I was making poems almost everyday about a lot of things, as well as trying to win her heart.

Moving on with the present, that girl who was the reason I started making poems is actually STILL the reason I'm making poems today... Yeah! The love of my life, to whom and has always been the reason for my poetry, my inspiration, and until forever will I always try to impress her with my works - EdanadE...

Catch up on her several poems, too, for it is her that makes me and my poems tick...
:glomp:

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:iconmhaezthro:
woohoo! :w00t:

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"to reality i bid farewell, as i take my eternal slumber...

:sleep:

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:iconnaldian:
Nyahehehe... First time I made a poem about me, making poetry...
:evillaugh:

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconmhaezthro:
hahahha..! astig! :D

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"to reality i bid farewell, as i take my eternal slumber...

:sleep:

[link]

PLZZZ -- [link]
:iconnaldian:
Thanks! :D

Besides, not many poets actually make a poem about poetry... I guess that makes me and this poem unique, somehow... :p

:evillaugh:

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconmhaezthro:
:nod: :nod: :nod:

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"to reality i bid farewell, as i take my eternal slumber...

:sleep:

[link]

PLZZZ -- [link]
:iconedanade:
:thumbsup:;p

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:b0x0rz::b0x0rz::b0x0rz:

ATWP


If you want to taste the ground,
feel free to attack me.
~NaLdiAn


:b0x0rz::b0x0rz::b0x0rz:
:iconnaldian:
Thanks, nhietotz! You're the one who actually gave me the idea about this poem, anyway... :D

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconnaldian:
:evillaugh:

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥

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