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Smiles belonged to only me.
Almost everyone could see.
Need not look for they can tell.
Your were under my love's spell.

Friends filled with so much envy.
Jealousy drove them crazy.
Tried to break us both apart.
It's only love in our hearts.

Stood our ground, we used to do.
What we had was more than true.
Not a soul can take away.
Love was really there to stay.

Always thought that will remain.
But now I feel so much pain.
Truth is what I dare refuse.
For myself, I'll truly lose.

Mistakes led me to this fate.
Seems I maybe just too late.
Though deep inside, I must try.
If this keeps up, I will die.

I need back what I have lost.
Risk it all despite the cost.
It's only you, I adore.
Show you love and plenty more.

Listen close and understand.
Help me do this hand in hand.
I can't do this all alone.
Not with heart that's turned to stone.

What I ask is not too much.
Just a little of your touch.
Feel the warmth of my embrace.
See the smile that's in my face.

Do the things you've asked me to.
Make my promises come true.
Shed your tears for only joy.
Cease in all my foolish ploy.

Give the life that you deserve.
You, I will forever serve.
Keep it up, I will not bend.
Happiness will never end.

The road ahead may be tough.
Though our love will be enough.
Embrace you warm, sweetest kiss.
Bring you to eternal bliss.

Walk once more, across the aisle.
Offer me your biggest smile.
Let our care shine way above.
Fill our lives with only love.

Take the risk, and this I say.
All the hurt will go away.
Melt your heart for this is true.
I am so in love with you.
©2008-2009 ~NaLdiAn
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Author's Comments

I made this poem for the love of my life, inspired by our lives and how I truly feel. I hope that she can feel the message in this poem because I poured all my heart and love into this.

I rarely make poems that are fixed in count because I find it difficult and really time consuming, so this one is not only unique in feeling but format as well. Every line consists of 7 counts, 7 because it's the month in which our love began.

Phew! This poem took me quite a while to finish, finding the right words, the right feeling, and making sure the count was exact, but here it is.

This goes out to the woman I love, *EdanadE, and to other love-struck people out there who want to do better in their relationships in spite of the pain and mistakes committed.

Remember, the only answer to love is love itself because hate or the like will only hurt both ways.

:glomp:

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:iconmattiello:
Love is a great emotion, is it not? I'm in love too, so I know what you're saying. This is a great piece of work for a great relationship. :thumbsup:

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:iconnaldian:
Indeed, it is. :D

And even though at times we get hurt, the happiness felt is worth it all.

Thanks so much! And best wishes to your relationship! :)

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with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconmattiello:
exactly. And to you as well.

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:iconmhaezthro:
aww.. i miss writing poems like this.. :no: :raincloud:

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:iconnaldian:
Wahehehe... So did I... :D

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconnaldian:
Any other comments, my darling?
:evillaugh:

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Like a painter wh○ paints
with the c○l○rs ○f this w○rld,
I'm a painter wh○ paints
with my th○ughts put int○ w○rds.


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*NaLdiAn♂ + *EdanadE♀ = ♥
:iconmhaezthro:
:nod: :nod: :nod:

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"to reality i bid farewell, as i take my eternal slumber...

:sleep:

[link]

PLZZZ -- [link]
:iconedanade:
uhmm.. :constipated:

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ATWP


If you want to taste the ground,
feel free to attack me.
~NaLdiAn


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